Kink in exile

Notes from a kinky nomad

50 word porn short

I watched him gleefully, holding a mug of tea with both hands, biting my lip.   He stroked the shaft of his penis, his muscular body tensing in anticipation.  Impatient, I kneeled on the bed unzipping my jeans with one hand and slipping my fingers past the waistband of my panties. 

 

And here is the first version, which exceeded the word limit:

I watched him gleefully holding my mug of tea close to my body with both hands, biting my lower lip, delighting in this indulgence.   He stroked the shaft of his penis, his muscular body tensing in anticipation.  Not wanting to wait my turn I unzipped my jeans with one hand, and slipped my fingers past the waistband of my panties careful not to spill my steaming tea. 

Written by kinkinexile

September 27, 2007 at 9:37 am

Posted in fiction, fun stuff, writing

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  1. I actually liked the first version more.

    maymay

    September 27, 2007 at 1:16 pm

  2. i was worried about the tea

    maja

    November 1, 2007 at 6:27 am


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